What do you think of this page(part 2)?

Very much the romance. I have never like romance novels but millions do. I think romance novels are the first to be knocked down because no one really takes them seriously. I am sorry to say that includes me. I am not saying that romance writes are bad writes just not my style. I don't know the story line so it is hard to give good feed back but your writing is good. I think the best way to put romance into a book is to have it in the background. Have the leading lady be more interesting than what man she ends up with. She needs to have her own life and the should be down played. Don't go into great detail just state that it happened and it was good. Make things more about the relationship and not the . I can like the Notebook because it didn't deal with , it dealt with people. I think that is what makes good true love stories more than 10 cent romance novels that you see selling at yard sells for well 10 cents a piece. Make the girl strong and independent. I am not a writer but I am a reader. I don't read romance because it all seems the same. The same story just different names and I am never attached to the leading lady because I just can't relate to her. I only read this part so if I am way off then I am sorry. Good luck and I hope I helped.